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inteferon
further down the Spiral
(11/3/02 6:19:57 pm)
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Rhymes for
Samara
I'll start with an irreverent one....
Ding dong
dell
Samara's in the well
But now we've put some Pinesol
down
So she won't mind the smell.
Here's
another:
Hickory dickory dock
The Curse ran-down the
clock
The clock struck one: "Ding!"
And there were flies,
slime pools and corpses everywhere
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Ghetto
Ring
further down the
Spiral
(11/13/02 1:59:56
pm)
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Re: Rhymes for
Samara
Little girl in the well?
How was it that you fell?
Climbing
out for vengeance wrought,
with evil plans that aren't for
naught,
How can we stop this demon curse?
To end your
blood-stained hateful thirst?
I cry out in fear, your face i
see,
but then it ends, my spirit free...
-One man, one obsession: The Ring! |
inteferon
citizen of the
Loopworld
(11/13/02 2:04:38
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Re: Rhymes for
Samara
Cool! You're obsessed all right. But then, so am I....
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Ghetto
Ring
further down the
Spiral
(11/13/02 2:24:21
pm)
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Re: Rhymes for
Samara
here's a haiku before i go:
One eye, one
face,
Looking into the face,
I know death is alive!
-One man, one obsession: The Ring! |
SlowBurn
further down the Spiral
(11/13/02 2:29:25 pm)
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lmao - here's my
classy contribution
Booya! Green ass ho
Gonna run up in your ass
Out through the
TV
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inteferon
citizen of the
Loopworld
(11/13/02 6:16:52
pm)
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Re: Rhymes for
Samara
Here's my haiku:
Macbeth murders Sleep.
The girl finds
Sleep's putrid flesh,
brings the corpse to writhe
Edited by: inteferon
at: 11/14/02 12:22:37 am
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5arah
Sadako slave
(11/13/02
8:28:16 pm)
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not a rhyme
but...
Don't you worry, they won't find her body
I want you to know
she's found peace in yonder well
Don't keep freakin, I want you
to know
That shes gone by the place where the red tree is
planted
(Adapted from the song "Another world" by Beborn
Beton; from Anna's point of view)
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Uber1337Bob
Sadako slave
(11/13/02
11:37:18 pm)
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Ghetto Ring has
no idea what a Haiku is.
I'm sitting here right next to GR right now, him having just shown
me this infamous feat of cinema. He then came over here with me
(probably because he's a scared little girl) and had me check out
the forum.
First of all, while my mind's on this tangent, you
all bring up some interesting debates, though I think a few might
have been a little too far read into.
Back on subject, GR's
Haiku ended up being
4
6
6
instead
of
5
7
5
Like Haiku's supposed to be.
I can never
skip a chance to openly humiliate my friends in settings which don't
involve me 
Carry on your merry ways.
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Ghetto
Ring
out from the
well
(11/15/02 2:21:02
pm)
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Re: I know
now
Man, it seems like no one likes poetry anymore.
-One man, one obsession: The
Ring!
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