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inteferon
further down the Spiral
(11/3/02 6:19:57 pm)
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Rhymes for Samara
I'll start with an irreverent one....

Ding dong dell
Samara's in the well
But now we've put some Pinesol down
So she won't mind the smell.

Here's another:

Hickory dickory dock
The Curse ran-down the clock
The clock struck one: "Ding!"
And there were flies, slime pools and corpses everywhere

Ghetto Ring
further down the Spiral
(11/13/02 1:59:56 pm)
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Re: Rhymes for Samara
Little girl in the well?
How was it that you fell?
Climbing out for vengeance wrought,
with evil plans that aren't for naught,
How can we stop this demon curse?
To end your blood-stained hateful thirst?
I cry out in fear, your face i see,
but then it ends, my spirit free...

-One man, one obsession: The Ring!

inteferon 
citizen of the Loopworld
(11/13/02 2:04:38 pm)
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Re: Rhymes for Samara
Cool! You're obsessed all right. But then, so am I....

Ghetto Ring
further down the Spiral
(11/13/02 2:24:21 pm)
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Re: Rhymes for Samara
:lol

here's a haiku before i go:

One eye, one face,
Looking into the face,
I know death is alive!

-One man, one obsession: The Ring!

SlowBurn
further down the Spiral
(11/13/02 2:29:25 pm)
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lmao - here's my classy contribution
Booya! Green ass ho
Gonna run up in your ass
Out through the TV

inteferon 
citizen of the Loopworld
(11/13/02 6:16:52 pm)
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Re: Rhymes for Samara
Here's my haiku:

Macbeth murders Sleep.
The girl finds Sleep's putrid flesh,
brings the corpse to writhe

Edited by: inteferon  at: 11/14/02 12:22:37 am
5arah
Sadako slave
(11/13/02 8:28:16 pm)
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not a rhyme but...

Don't you worry, they won't find her body
I want you to know she's found peace in yonder well
Don't keep freakin, I want you to know
That shes gone by the place where the red tree is planted

(Adapted from the song "Another world" by Beborn Beton; from Anna's point of view)

Uber1337Bob
Sadako slave
(11/13/02 11:37:18 pm)
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Ghetto Ring has no idea what a Haiku is.
I'm sitting here right next to GR right now, him having just shown me this infamous feat of cinema. He then came over here with me (probably because he's a scared little girl) and had me check out the forum.

First of all, while my mind's on this tangent, you all bring up some interesting debates, though I think a few might have been a little too far read into.

Back on subject, GR's Haiku ended up being
4
6
6
instead of
5
7
5
Like Haiku's supposed to be.

I can never skip a chance to openly humiliate my friends in settings which don't involve me :) Carry on your merry ways.

Ghetto Ring
out from the well
(11/15/02 2:21:02 pm)
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Re: I know now
Man, it seems like no one likes poetry anymore.
:(

-One man, one obsession: The Ring!